jellyfish back strophe

A Poem by jeRRy.whaLLey

sHe disturbs meaning
~ in rhythmic pulsation ~
exciting to fluorescence a deeply subtext'd verse;
'but don't mistake a stinging strophe for arrogance.'

'that's just fierce presence,'
moved by waves of astonishment
cascading through a nervous and vascular system
spontaneously overflow'd {sea through}

with a reaching iridescent tentacle
sHe simply, elegantly, fluoresces a gleam in your eyes ~~~

© 2008 jeRRy.whaLLey

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Gandré

What a great poem, Jerry. You write about all the female seeker. We are not always that well - organized in our space which is perceived or known or inferred to have its own distinct existence when we are not phased - we are living or nonliving - when this space is obsessed just with our own thoughts......."'that's just fierce presence,'
moved by waves of astonishment "----------I thought.....this was fantastic.. you are such a poet, Jerry, miss you so much here, dearest.

Posted 1 Year Ago

TL Boehm

profound. I love bioluminesence - if I were a superhero - That would be my power. this poem speaks to me on an inarticulatable level.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on June 15, 2008

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jeRRy.whaLLey

North Vancouver, Canada

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love is a sphere which has its center everywhere, and its circumference nowhere; longing is the compass, always pointing there To write properly and clear, Is in part, the goal. To write simply, and .. [more]