Looking through Darkness

Dark Poem

I look not knowing what I see. 

Is this for real or fantasy?

Dreams unending, dreams are fools.

Darkness consuming all we do.

Author's Note

Just muttering so dont mind the grammer

Reviews

[Imperfection]

Great write.

Short and powerful.

Dreams unending, dreams are fools.

Darkness consuming all we do.

I think so too, sometimes. I feel foolish when my dreams get broken and then again I dream some more...
:-|

[Teenage poet]

It wasn't that bad at all. It was actually rather interesting. Yet i wish it was rather longer.

[Tina Kline]

I read your poem. Not so bad. I won't say its lacking because it is an interesting idea
and can be stated so many different ways.

Tina

[X Sandra X]

Its really simple but, I think the way it's so short its like BAM I dont think that expalaine it good, but it's awesome no doubts. Peace