I had never been told

just a short little poem on love

 

Heart beating fast, pounding out of my chest Millions of goose bumps dance on my flesh How can it be that my worlds upside down Flying so high that I can’t see the ground A new rush of heat floods through my soul How love can change you I had never been told

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

You've said a world in a limited number of well written words: the true definition of a true poet.
And it is true that when wonderful things happen to us, we are so unprepared. It sort of balancing out since the bad things that come, also come unannounced. We tremble before both!

Sal

[A.M.P.]

I love the great feeling you get from this poem, it is very powerful. =) Great rhyming too, it flows well. Great job!

[Stephen]

Good imaging.
Good feel.
Great emotion.

[Rachel Cooper]

Really short. Really simple. But powerful all the same. Proof that you don't need a lot of fancy words to make your feelings known.

[unspokenguilt]

short and sweet!