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So Long

So Long

A Poem by Jeff Bresee
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Song I heard in a dream... check it out.

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This is a song that I first heard in a dream, one that was so clear that it woke me up in the middle of the night stumbling through the dark to find a pen to write it down. I then had the chance to work with some great artists to make it, primarily Christina Quinones on the lead vocal. I hope you like.

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The lyrics are:

Lay your arms around me
Hold me very tightly
Don't keep me from saying
All the things I’ve wanted to say
The things I've wanted to share for oh so long

So Long

So Long

So Long

So Long

Lay your arms around me
Let me feel your heart beat
Don't keep me from feeling
All the things I feel inside for you
The things I've wanted to share for oh so long

 

So Long

So Long

So Long

So Long

 

Lay your arms around me
Slowly set the night free
Don't keep me from sharing
All the things I've want to do
Oh the things I've wanted to share for oh so long

So long
For so long
So long

So Long


Lay your arms around me
Hold me very tightly
Whisper that you love me
And hold me in your arms

Share this night with me forever more


So long

So Long

So Long

So Long


(This night will last forever)
So long
(This night will last forever)
So long
(This night will last forever)
So long




© 2015 Jeff Bresee



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the lyrics are lovely and romantic. Will done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The song wouldn't play for me, but I really loved the lyrics. I could see them on the radio.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Your songs are nice as always, if I'm allowed being a little blunt however, your lyrics, though good, feel a bit too generic (I really don't know if there's a better word to express it). It is good, but like a bit too common, or something you'd expect. I really hope you don't take it in a bad way, as I regard you as a fellow musician (since not all who play are musicians), but I feel you need to push yourself a bit farther when it comes to what you sing. In other words, you need to push yourself to create "the song" which will stay in everybody's mind forever (hopefully) every time. Overally very nice, both to the ears and eyes.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful poetry and song my friend. Ability to sing and write. A special gift. Thank you for sharing your outstanding song.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful song, I love the lyrics and it is very well put together. Lovely voices, really sound great together.
Wonderful job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kudos on an outstanding song that truly does have a dreamy quality that I love, and the vocals express it so well! I was glad to get the read request; it was great to revisit your work after a while. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Its a lovely song ... well put together and professional. I can already see your audience tapping their feet and singing along. A great job.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautifully rendered, you've made your dream a composed reality, totally enjoyed the lyrics and songstress.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on September 19, 2015
Last Updated on September 19, 2015
Tags: love, romance, music, alternative rock

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Jeff Bresee
Jeff Bresee

Dallas, TX



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I love to write poetry and then turn it into songs. I am a singer/songwriter for Weathered Pages, a Fort Worth, Texas based band. Check us out at www.weatheredpages.com And I hope you enjoy .. more..

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