REGRET

REGRET

A Poem by Jeff Bresee

The piece that is missing is the piece of my heart

That I threw like a stone when our love fell apart

Without looking I threw it as far as I could

Now I’m stuck with the fact…

That I’ve lost it for good

 

 

…Jeff Bresee


© 2011 Jeff Bresee



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This is awe-inspiring in its simplicity and the succinct way it conveys the emotion, and it flows so effortlessly. I like it a lot.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Great rhyming in this wonderful poem, and so true. Sorry it took so long to read this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


succinct truth. Well penned

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sweet as it is short nice

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the change in rhyming scheme in the second to last line, it draws out the ending for just a moment longer, without breaking rhythm.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Crap :( ... short, sweet and to the point...
Broken heart in 5 lines :)
good write.. there is no way to make this poem better it's just excellent!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Awesomeness personified

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kiddish

Posted 6 Years Ago


As short as this poem is, it's impact is very big. This is a very strong piece it's hard to know when you've found that true love you want to hold onto forever because like you and many before you and surely many to come you never know what you have until it's gone. Thank you for sharing this piece I hope you get back what you have lost. Don't loose hope, good luck.

-Vee

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Kia
WOW....short but very heartfelt and emotion filled.....I have been there.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on January 7, 2011
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Tags: love, hurtful words, breakup, heartache, regret

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Jeff Bresee
Jeff Bresee

Dallas, TX



About
I love to write poetry and then turn it into songs. I am a singer/songwriter for Weathered Pages, a Fort Worth, Texas based band. Check us out at www.weatheredpages.com And I hope you enjoy .. more..

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