Lonely Skeleton

Lonely Skeleton

A Poem by JELLYCAT

The high fades down.
The forest hugs my skeleton.
It surrounds me, drying my tears with a brush on the cheek,
"Darling you are never alone."

I look up to the window above the tree branches,
Feeling the spirit entering my blood.
Nature lives inside me.
We are all it's child to be.

I'm a child lost in a woman's body,
Traveling the stars of yesterday.
But suddenly in the stillness of the forest the third eye opens.
I can see too much, its wonderfully frightful.

I shiver with a smile, naked as the wind kisses my legs.
The world is my dangerous playground.
I disconnect from my body,
Joining the world beyond this one.






© 2016 JELLYCAT



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babe am left in the sky
were my voice cant reach the ear
i drain in tears of amazement
as my mouth could voice with words of surprise
and my hand could reach out to the earth to pen down my pains for the world to see
and when my message could reach down the earth
i had witnesses that saw with me that YOUR AMAZING

Posted 2 Years Ago


babe am left in the sky
were my voice cant reach the ear
i drain in tears of amazement
as my mouth could voice with words of surprise
and my hand could reach out to the earth to pen down my pains for the world to see
and when my message could reach down the earth
i had witnesses that saw with me that YOUR AMAZING

Posted 2 Years Ago


Something supernatural here
Or an epiphany

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

honestly, a bit of both :)
Very nice, liked it a lot. Very descriptive, well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

Thanks, I been working on trying to describe stuff in a way that makes more sense lol
Amazing imagery, and beautiful description. Nicely penned.. 😊😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Blackstar

2 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :)
I love it!
Well done!
Keep on writing!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

Thank you emily :)
Beautiful, this makes me wish I lived in a log cabin in the middle of the woods, so every morning when I look outside I'll experience exactly what your poem describes. A great write :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

Heheh yeah would be great! :) though the whole energy of city life is fun, there is something really.. read more
Enjoyable and well written. Maybe try and avoid using "I'm" ?

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this write Jellycat. I liked the darkness of the write and your descriptions were spot on. Good work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Aaron! :)

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Added on December 29, 2015
Last Updated on January 30, 2016
Tags: nature, loneliness, naked, spirit, adventure, world, wisdom, meaning, knowledge, awakening

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JELLYCAT
JELLYCAT

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I write for myself, without filters. I don't write for the single purpose of being understood or getting approval, its more of a playground for me to improve my writing creatively outside of school .. more..

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