If Only

If Only

A Poem by jen -- JG
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Sometimes we just can't find the words --- - edited to correct the title spelling

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If Only

 

I could speak of many things

why a moth flies straight to flame,

why only some clouds carry rain.

I could speak of butterfly wings:

If only ------- I had the words.

 

I could describe the setting sun

the laughter of children at play,

their drowsy tantrums at end of day.

I could describe what they call -- fun:

If only --------I had the words.

 

I could tell you how I feel,

how your absence breaks my heart

and I only exist -- while we're apart.

I could tell you my love is real:

If only ---------I had the words

 

I could speak of love so true,

my deepest feelings I could not hide,

they hold me forever by your side.

I could speak of love ---- with you:

if -- only ---- I had --- the words.

 


 

© 2008 jen -- JG


Author's Note

jen -- JG
any and all comments etc welcome - thanks

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Congrats on your great winning poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


even as writers there are so many times when words escape us ...either in life or in our writing. I think as writers we feel this loss more keenly....even when we are speaking. One little thing..typo in the title - Onley should be "only" lol. nice job.

laura

Posted 16 Years Ago


i purely enjoy this!

Posted 16 Years Ago


The sentiment of this is lovely and it is structured well. Nicely done. Best wishes, Bethlynne.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 7, 2008

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jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia



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I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..

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