Just Need Time.......

Just Need Time.......

A Poem by jen -- JG
"

Writing my way out.............

"

Just Need Time…………….

 

 

 

 

 

Don’t want to go out

 

 

 

"Safer here – won’t see anyone

……No questions asked"

 

 

 

……………..No explanation required

 

 

 

 

Don’t want to get up

 

 

 

"in bed - it’s warm,

dressed or not

who cares – no one sees."

 

 

 

………………..Bury head under blanket

 

 

 

 

Alone

……….with-

...dark shadows -

…….Twisting fear –

 

……and

 

…angry frustration

……..burning

……………….Soul deep

 

 

 

 

………"Just need

………………….TIME

………..……………….to

……………………………..grieve!"

 

 

©Copyright Jen-JG - 11/03/08

 

 

© 2008 jen -- JG


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jen -- JG
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I wish to say I wish I lived across town from you, and not on the far side of our planet. I wish to say I keep you in my thoughts every day.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow. This is a great piece, and it has universal impact. Though anatomically I could never relate to the motivation behind this, I can relate to the feeling it holds. It's a true snapshot of human emotion.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I understand....

Celia

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The only thing I wish to say is that you will emerge when you are ready....the world will wait for you.

I'm glad to see that you're writing :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A big hug ... so much angst .. so poignant ...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 10, 2008

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jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia



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I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..

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