KITTENS

KITTENS

A Poem by jen -- JG
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First cinquain I've written for contest

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Cinquain 1

 

Kittens

 

Kittens

Innocent, sweet

Playful joyful actions

Bring delighted smiling laughter

Fulfilled.

 

 

©Copyright jen-JG - 6 February 2009


© 2009 jen -- JG



Author's Note

jen -- JG
As always honesty works wonders - first one of these I've tried to write - does it work - does it need improvement - tell me what you really think - all comments welcome- thank you

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My little Dorothy is like that. She is innocent, sweet, playful and makes us happy. I liked to write something about Dorothy but you did it before.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I have two cats. One is 9 months old. She is a trouble maker. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dear Jen,

Another masterful write. You've worked well within the contest confines on this one to produce an interesting poem. I love cats. I currently have 13. And yes those kittens are so innocent and full of life's joy. You've captured their personalities quite well.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautifully written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yes it does work, beautifully! Well done, its up there with the best Jen!
Bravo! Thank you for entering this delightful cinquain to my contest ! ~ Helena :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I'm not a expecialist (in any form! and i'm also trying them for the fun of it!) but in my opinion: it works very nicely and it is LOVELY!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia



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I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..

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