since i was small

since i was small

A Poem by oxo
"

laughing at myself in this poem. :D

"
the day that i was born,
i was very, very small.
my mother says that then
i couldn't do much at all.
iv'e grown much older now
and do lots of things myself;
but why, i can't still reach
the top of a six feet tall bookshelf?

© 2012 oxo



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I enjoyed this. The rhythm of this poem I felt was very well expressed. I enjoyed this work and I look forward to enjoying more. I don't know much about how other poets feel about writing but for me rhythm is always key. I loved the rhythm of this one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

thank you for that helpful comment. :) i'm still experimenting and learning new things. thanks for r.. read more
Haha, you must be short like me....cute read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

yes, you're right :) thanks :)
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haha... statistically speaking the average hight of our race is.... blank... hehe.. well genetics and its mysteries.... why not use a ladder kabayan or a chair perhaps... ;)

short and witty poem... enjoyed its clever use of reality... great!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

a chair is always my life saver kabayan. haha
That is a short cute poem. Nice!
The poet is probably similar?
:]
Thank you for reviewing my short poem. And no.. I'm really not that good of a guitaristo... there's a video of me on my profile, if you like.


Posted 4 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

thanks. i'm indeed too small. hahaha. but i like it.
i'll check your video, anyway. :)
Alas, we are stuck with what we get genetically speaking, aren't we! I can't reach that bookshelf either. Keep smiling, Sharon

Posted 4 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

haha. yes, we have to stick on that! but i'm happy for the way i was made. :)
This is a really funny poem. It was really fun to read! Nice work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

thank you for that. :)

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