the drink

the drink

A Poem by oxo
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i'm feeling sad, let's start to drink. i'm feeling happy, let's start to drink. i am so stressed, come on lets drink. and a little depressed, i wanted to drink. there's a celebration,

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i'm feeling sad,
i needed to drink.
i'm feeling happy,
let's start to drink.
i am so stressed,
come on lets drink.
and a little depressed,
i wanted to drink.
there's a celebration,
it is good to drink.
and there's a reunion,
there's always a drink.
but tonight, i say, i didn't drink.
yet they all tell me, i did, i did had a swig.

© 2012 oxo



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Pax
this put a big smile on my face... :)
well lets go for a drink to celebrate this playful write.
sayang nga lang mahal na daw yung bilihin ng mga alcholic drinks dyn sa pinas...
ubos yung laman ng bulsa natin dyan lol...
nice write kabayan!

Posted 4 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

hahaha. tama, may bago n kasing batas, sin tax law, pagpapataw ng dagdag singil sa mga alcoholic dri.. read more
The perfect business to be in. happy or sad, and every occasion in betweem, we'll raise a glass to. great visual perception in these words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

thank you :)
Distant horizons

4 Years Ago

:-)
Lovely word play dear, this is stunning.
How the word drink can filled in so good
On many layers. I enjoyed this.

E.L.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I'm going to go out on a limb here and say... you like to drink? lol.

Posted 5 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

yes, but not too much. :)
" Don't get too high on the bottle...just a little nip every now and then" VAN ZANDT from Help Somebody If You Can

I liked it but the last line felt wrong...maybe proofread this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


oxo

4 Years Ago

thanks for that. i'm actually drunk when i wrote this. haha

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Added on December 17, 2012
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