Waves of Our World

Our two worlds combined

Would send the universe spinning

Violets and blues

Blues and violets

Dancing on the rays of infinity

 

Our hearts, melting together with gold

Our souls, breaking free from what circumstance has shown

Our spirits, flying in luminous tones

 

A Cosmo of a love we have

A vast creation of endless beauty

Hope and devotion

Devotion and hope

Let this love seep right through me 

Reviews

[Moonie]

A gem indeed. My favourite lines would be:
"Violets and blues
Blues and violets
Dancing on the rays of infinity

Our hearts, melting together with gold
Our souls, breaking free from what circumstance has shown
Our spirits, flying in luminous tones"
Thanks for bringing this to my attention. =)

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you :))

[New Theory]

Cosmic love, thats what came to my mind when I read this, a surreal poem, magical and wonderful.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Our hearts, melting together with gold
Our souls, breaking free from what circumstance has shown
Our spirits, flying in luminous tones

Yes! So beautiful. I keep reading this stanza over and over again.
Nicely done!

[Awakened Rose]

ahhh thank you :)

[Aethereal]

I enjoyed how you expressed hope and devotion as violets and blues “dancing on the rays of infinity“. All is light, and light is freedom.

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you :)

[Chris Micha]

I love the elements displayed in this piece. The way you describe it is magnificent. Beautiful job.

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you so much :)

[Cory Barrett]

Two world colliding to make a better one, sounds like harmony.

[KWP]

Let this love seep right through me .... I can relate to that ...

You are. Rather inspiring poet my friend ...

Thank you. X x

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you so much :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The merging of the two souls was amazing. In the true essence of love,
this love, was on an immeasurable scale. My favorite part of this whole work
was the creation of the nest of emotion in which we feel so safe.

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you so very much :)

[Awakened Rose]

This is so gorgeously rich, there is made a true connection of eternal love within your words, you have a great skill in writing, I could read this over and over again, and feel very home. Thank you for your poetry.

- Elisa

[Awakened Rose]

Ahhh thank you so very much :)) :)

I really enjoy your work, so thank YOU, ;) I will come by for more...