Redeem Me

My love,

The days have gone dry and my heart is beginning to whimper.

I feel no tug upon my soul.

Call on the angels of mercy,

And ask for salvation to be shown.

 

For I can no longer live another day alone; in a love created for two-

Not when it was built with sweat and tears from the vessel of you.

 

So let humility wash over me if this love is all but a façade

But let grace enchant me if my faith was the cause

Reviews

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Very nice poem. I can really feel the longing in here. You've portrayed it well and have given it life! :)

[Aethereal]

It's painful when a bond is broken thus betraying our initial faith in the reasonableness of it. Angles shall always show mercy for having good intentions. Naivety is no crime.

[KWP]

Oh wow ... For some reason after you reviews I knew I may just sink
Right into your words ...

I was not disappointed ...

So many layers, so much depth ...

Nice to meet you xx

[Awakened Rose]

Thank you ! Nice to meet you too :)

Such a beautiful write, here, heavy sigh.

I think you did explain so well here what it's like for all of us,
when we grow appart, and you explained especially well, what could be just left.

I enjoy your pen, truly.

- Elisa