The Dream ♥

The Dream ♥

A Poem by Jen Marks
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I wrote this song based off a sonnet I wrote for English class last year :)

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[CHORUS:]


I know she's living

And I know there's an easier way

I know you're forgiving

And you see the light of day


Sometimes I'm wishing

You'd say what I want you to say

Sometimes I can see him

Feels like I'm floating in space


[VERSE:]


Take my hand tonight

Until the morning's light

The trees will sway below

And birds are taking flight


I was wandering afar

But now I feel so right

You are my shining star

How do you shine so bright?


[CHORUS:]

 

I know she's living

And I know there's an easier way

I know you're forgiving

And you see the light of day


Sometimes I'm wishing

You'd say what I want you to say

Sometimes I can see him

Feels like I'm floating in space


[VERSE:]


Blowing thru my hair

We can never do this twice

And I can't help but stare

Your eyes seem to entice


Now I am unaware

The flame will soon ignite

I'm longing to be there...


[OUTRO:]


I'll sacrifice my heart

My lonely heart

It needs a fresh start

This hopeless tradgedy is killing me


© 2010 Jen Marks



Author's Note

Jen Marks
I might post this song somewhere later, so be on the lookout! :)

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LOVE IT. VERY NICE SONG. I WOULD LOVE TO PUT THE
INSTRUMENTAL PART TO IT.

Posted 3 Months Ago


I don't know if you've ever read or studied anything about Carl Jung's archetypes, but thats one of many things i am currently studying myself. With that said i cant help but think of the anima/animus archetype when reading this beautiful piece of work. There is a lot of symbolism behind this song i can relate myself to and appreciate the opportunity to do exactly that. If you performed or even just recorded this song ill be on the lookout. Excellent work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like it! don't know exactly what you're trying to say but I like the way you've said it---- go figure

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow this is really good.
It's romantic and mysterious.
I really like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


sounds very romantic you have a very good flow going here, I can't wait till I can hear the tune, I can almost imagine it

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 1, 2009
Last Updated on January 7, 2010
Tags: poem, lyrics, dream, dreaming, living, trials, forgiving, love, heartbreak, light, words, night, morning, star, shine, wind, eyes, enticing, heart, longing, sacrifice, hopeless, tradgedy

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Jen Marks
Jen Marks

Toronto, ON, Canada



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