Symphony (For You) ♥

Symphony (For You) ♥

A Poem by Jen Marks
"

This started out as a slow song, but eventually turned out as a Santana-like pop/rock/spanish-style song! :) Enjoy -- it's my favourite out of all that I wrote! <3

"

[VERSE:]

 

Locked up and bound again

Don't know which way is out

Or how to get in

I'm always saying it

But never meaning it

Just turn around

 

Turn around again

Don't know how many times

I'll say this again

You call me beautiful

It's all so magical

 

[PRE-CHORUS:]

 

And this time

It's true

'Cause it's all for you

Go ahead

Say you swear

And you know I'll be there

 

[CHORUS:]

 

'Cause you're the only one I'd find

To get into my state of mind

And you're the only one I'd see

In my dreams

And I am wanting you tonight

We'll stay up 'till the sunlight

And baby, this is your symphony

It's for you...but all for me

 

[VERSE:]

 

Imagine the God of love

He's at his highest peak

And rising above

You see him standing tall

Yeah, he's above it all

He's leading the way

 

Oh, the way of love

He'll tell you that the one

Is always enough

As far as he can see

You are the one for me

 

[PRE-CHORUS:]

 

And this time

It's true

'Cause it's all for you

Go ahead

Say you swear

And you know I'll be there

 

[CHORUS:]

 

'Cause you're the only one I'd find

To get into my state of mind

And you're the only one I'd see

In my dreams

And I am needing you tonight

We'll stay up 'till the sunlight

And baby, this is your symphony

It's for you...but all for me

 

[CHORUS:]

 

'Cause you're the only one I'd find

To get into my state of mind

And you're the only one I'd see

In my dreams

And I am begging you tonight

We'll stay up 'till the sunlight

And baby, this is your symphony

It's for you...

 

But all for me

 


© 2009 Jen Marks



Author's Note

Jen Marks
I really hope you like this -- it came so easily for me.
I would definitely say that this is my fave out of all the songs I've written!

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♥Jen Marks

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I liked it! love that last line! it is quite an accomplishement you have here

Posted 8 Years Ago


Really great!!! You'll find this one hard to beat, but you will get even better.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this piece it shots off your songwriting talent beautifully

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow! the lyrics are beautiful, you have great talent and put together a really great song. I really like this one. Keep up the good work

Posted 8 Years Ago


kinda sweet if you ask me, and it has care and just a frienship/close vibe for somebody. it's really relaxking and enjoyable reading your words. a good job indeed Jen.

-Will

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its really romantic :) i once felt like this about someone, its nice that u can get this out because when i felt like the u did u was too scared to tell anyone. good job

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice =]

Posted 8 Years Ago


I do not think this is too 'lovey-dovey' at all! I do not mean to counteract E. A. Fielder either. You did a wonderful job with this. And so many of us can relate. (:

-Mary

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As lyrics, they're not bad, although without having heard the song it's hard to be certain. I think what the Rt.Honourable Fielder was getting at is that it's easier to seem profound in song than it is on paper. Which is borne out to be true just be reading most song lyrics without having heard the music first.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I would say this one is not my cup of tea. I like love poetry but I feel this is a bit too lovey dovey for me. The title made me think of a line by Justin Timberlake: "If I wrote you a symphony just to say how much you mean to me. what would you do?"

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jen Marks
Jen Marks

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