dirtywhirl.

lapping at your cup

my fingers graze your soul

as much as i have of you already

only serves to make me want more

Reviews

[Tony]

Jenniewren's quiet poetry is beautiful, and much, much louder if one can hear the color and flavor of melancholy.
That's the stuff that is in the place of unnecessary words in this poem.
Which is the way it is supposed to be, I believe.

[Nobody.]

addiction...of the warm and fuzzy sort.
:) nother good one!
cheers!

[Rory CJ Frankson]

enjoying these interludes

[alan peter kelly]

one cup is never enough :)

[Robin]

all i ever wanted to be ....

[Crowley]

Ughhh...never heard that song, it is amazing..and you dear are extraordinary.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Man..There is something primal about it all.
It gave me chills.