piano blink.

piano blink.

A Chapter by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

close my eyes
twirl
arms outspread
holding onto the air to catch me
twirl
spinningdervishjenniegirl
twirl

twirl til the world dissolves
and the horizon tilts
twirl til my world makes sense

it can all only get better from here





© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)



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sometimes one must 'twirl' until things change. I love when you compress words like that...brings the child to the surface.
cheers!

Posted 7 Years Ago


spinningdervishjenniegirl... this is cool

Posted 7 Years Ago


I have always loved to escape equilibrium....
.... spinningdervishjenniegirl twirl....
I feel an urge to try that right now....
I better go outside.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you think? one can only hope (ha ha) keep twirling jenniewren

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"spinningdervishjenniegirl " yep , don't blink

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My favorite of the bunch so far....spinningdervishjenniegirl...I love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have a way of saying your heart that dances and sparkles and sings

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet poem. It has a childlike quality to it all.
I found an innocence that is lost on the way to adulthood.
Its beautiful that the child can come back to save the woman.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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