i will not take these things for granted.

i will not take these things for granted.

A Chapter by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

touch of fingers along 
the hollow dimples in the 
small of my back

the breathless pause
before the first time
you said my name


© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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I have enjoyed this journey of your translations within this book , if this were to be the end, it would be a fitting one ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i usually like to get her name first...but, in your case, i'd make an exception

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. so simple. so beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Toad holds a very special place in my heart....this was stunning..the writing, the pairing and the video a seamless expression of what's important....everything has value, particularly the things we forget to notice. I was moved.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, I like this a lot.
It's short, like a quick intake of air.. straight to the lungs,
and now I can breathe again.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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