say hello, and wave goodbye..

say hello, and wave goodbye..

A Chapter by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
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for Rich.. you left a heartbroken collection of friends in your wake.. sail on, my friend, sail ever on

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you held a world
too tightly clenched
in a fist
not strong enough
to hold it







© 2011 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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We can't save everyone in need without needing to be saved ourselves... a very powerful and poignant little piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Written in enough beautifully expressed words to make it a hundred percent real.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I am willing to bet your a 'people poker' you make your point so well ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow....sorry.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 29, 2011
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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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