facial scripture.

facial scripture.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

hidden 
within the laugh lines
round my lips
and eyes
nestle
quite a few smiles
you alone 
have authored 

© 2011 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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This is really good, it's deep yet it gets to point =) Good job! I liked this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The power of this piece is the understated, almost a through off, one complete sentence broken into 8 brief lines. Yet, it has a longer softness that lingers well after it's read. A very nifty piece of work with heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


that's a poem a book long .. wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


some of my best work , I must say :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is simply exquisite :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Perfectly worded! I love the connection between 'lines' and 'authored' and the tender feel of 'nestle'. An entire story told in 8 short lines. Excellent!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This type of milestone...I have never encountered before today. I know this isnt quite the point...but you made me think of widows and widowers as you explained how they can proclaim that they are not alone. You have truly opened my eyes...
wow...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I hope that the crying with pain lines around your eyes are not attributed to me....thats bullshit I tell you, pure bullshit! lol....sorry, I get so carried away. I loved this, how can you fit any more feeling into 19 words....loved this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


pure brilliance...this one! what an idea...what an image. beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahhh now that is just beautiful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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