Dear Time

Live to fullest and take advantage of every single second, minute and hour that life has.

"Dear Time"

Dear time 

I came to write you a letter 

I wanna know why you run when I want you to stop 

and why you go slow when I want you to run.

Why you escape from me 

when I wanna hold you and not let go 

and how you always find a way

to win without me being able to.

But thanks for all the hurries 

even though sometimes I hated you so much 

If it wasn't for you I couldn't have done some things 

and because I got no time I have to do them before you go.

Author's Note

Do things before you run out of time because that's one of the things you can't stop.

Reviews

[Bare trees]

Time is an enemy. When you are sick, time slows to a crawl. When you are young and with friends, it's time to go in because it's getting late. When you are in a waiting room, once again, it crawls.

As time goes on, we don't do things we wished we had. Time never waits and sometimes it can't get here fast enough.

Note: bad line...to finish winning when I want you to do not.

[Jennifer]

Thanks for the review and your sincere comment, I like the way you see time so accurate

[Bare trees]

You're welcome.

[Chris Shaw]

Time isn't a friend to anyone in my opinion. I agree that it shouldn't be wasted. I enjoyed reading your words Jennifer.

Chris

[Jennifer]

I agree with you, thanks for reading and reviewing :)I really appreciate

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome

[Levi Levin]

A great piece of creativity indeed. Great job!

[Jennifer]

thank you so much!!

[April Blue]

Jennifer, This is a lovely piece.. I also really like the picture.. And you are absolutely right about time..

[Jennifer]

Thank you >< I try to find a picture that fits with the concept thanks for liking it too.

[April Blue]

:) :) :)

[Jennifer]

I tried* sorry for the mistake haha