MY LOVE

 

MY LOST SOUL ROAMING

WAITING AND LISTENING

FOR A MAN TO FREE ME

 

I LOST MY SOUL

WHEN THE ONE I LOVE 

KILLED ME

 

HE KILLED ME

WITH NO HESITATION OR WORRY

KNOWING THE PAIN HE WILL SUFFER

 

HE LAUGHED AND CRIED

AS HE BURRIED ME

WHILE I STOOD ASKING WHY

 

NOW MY SOUL WONT LEAVE IN PEACE
                 
NOWING THE CONSEQUENCE IT WILL SUFFER

IT TEARS AND SHREADS TOWN BY TOWN

LOOKING FOR THE MAN THAT KILLED ME

Reviews

[Alice N.]

thanxs

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most dower and emotional piece that screams to be read again and again, well done, great read.

[Alice N.]

actually i dont feel like that but when i wrote it i was looking at some else point of view n when i wrote i felt it as if it were my like instead of a love

[Jvl narasimharao]

You always want to be freed from the man you loved physically and spiritually.

[Im a reel vamp lover]

This is how im feeeling now. Love It!!