Into a lake of fire!

it's about going to hell and then asking for a second chance then you get your second chance ...

      Demons, Demons everywhere, 

Everywhere you look you see Demons, 

Have we descended upon Hell?

I ask myself how did i get here?

I ask my self again What have i done to get here?

As i walk further i see flames and a fiery pit of Hell , 

I get down on my knees and begin to pray , 

Oh dear God, 

Please , please forgive me, 

I hear a deep voice laughing , 

Ha ha ha ha , 

I got you now, 

Oh dear God  i say again , 

Please Please forgive me , 

Please give me a second chance , 

 Then all of a sudden something happened, 

I swoop right up out of there, 

I see bright lights a golden gate bridge , 

I seen someone walk towards me , 

It was hard to see him , 

His eyes was like fire , 

His hair was Gold , 

His face was so bright that you couldn't see it , 

God said , 

It's not your time yet , 

GO , go back home ,

GO on home i say to you , 

I give you a second chance , 

Now go home and celebrate 

Author's Note

well let me know what you think of this poem that i put together

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

If it were that easy? Hell is a real place and to prevent from getting there now is the time to make you life right with Christ while you are alive. Once you go to hell there is no coming back.

[Jamestry]

Second chance is golden. I hope we all are using ours well. Nice work

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive ending to the poem.
"God said ,
It's not your time yet ,
GO , go back home ,
GO on home i say to you ,
I give you a second chance ,
Now go home and celebrate "
In life few second chances. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[stars are far]

Horror... why .,,just kidding, that was amazingly done..well done ;)