Your my lover

it's a love poem i wrote hope you like it two versions let me know if you like the first or second better

  first version 

    Your my baby,

Your my honey, 

Your my sugar plum, 

I love you in so many way's ,

Perhaps a dinner date, 

Or a walk in the park, 

Even a midnight stroll upon the stars, 

I love you so much,

Words cannot explain , 

I love your touch , 

This aint no game, 

I love when we cuddle, 

Love to play, 

Your my baby, 

And i'll always love you until the day i die, 

Your my sweet lover, 

Love the feel of your lips , 

Touch of your skin, 

For ever i will love you . 

second version , 

your my lover, 

 my sweet baby boy, 

your my honey, 

my sugar plum, 

i love you in so many ways that you do not know, 

perhaps a dinner date will do, 

or a walk in the park, 

even a midnight stroll, 

upon the stars, 

i love you so much, 

words cannot explain, 

i love your touch, 

this aint no game, 

i love when we cuddle, 

love to play, 

your my baby, 

i'll always love you until the day i die, 

your my sweet lover, 

the touch of your skin, 

for ever i will love you 

      

Author's Note

let me know what you think .
don't be rude or mean either

Reviews

[wordman]

sweet love poem,a walk on the stars

[jennifer little]

thanks i finnaly started writing again took me a while to get back to writing but at least im doing it again

[wordman]

good to see you back !