The Curse !!!!!!!!

The Curse !!!!!!!!

A Poem by jensbooks
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it's a horor poem kind of and a action one at the same tim e

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      The Curse

 

  The shinning sun,

Laying down,

Love forever,

Live forever,

Money, riches, joy,

Oh what a joy,

It goes dark,

The wolfs are howling,

It gets darker, and darker,

In the night of howls,

Hear lies a screaming girl,

Help, help, and help me,

Someone’s trying to kill me,

Oh no what should I do,

Could it be the curse?

The curse from the underground world called Hell,

No it can’t be,

Out pop’s a winged figure so fruitful and scary,

It was dark and had scars all over it,

It was a horrible site.

Help, Help, and Help me,

The girl cried again,

Shadows in the dark,

What are they?

Oh no it’s the curse of satin,

Were all doomed,

Good bye.

 

 

   The End,

BY: JENNIFER LITTLE


© 2012 jensbooks



Author's Note

jensbooks
sad , horor , poem the curse the demon from hell trys to kill and will haunt you till this day

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A slightly childish (in a good way) horror poem. The imagery was well done and the poem was interesting. The poem wasn't really scary and the tone wasn't really horror based. Made me think of someone about to jump into action and save the girl. Had more of an action feel with horror elements. The poem was overall very good. One typo though. "It was dark and had scares all over it." I believe you meant scars. Just a minor typo that made me stop reading to figure out what you meant.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow!!! Very intense... Great job!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is frightening...a demon from Hell could pop up any time...

Posted 5 Years Ago



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hi im jen i am a single mother of a six month old baby girl im doing online high schooling i like to write on how i feel what i feel , also i like to write about stuff i hear see and do, and als.. more..

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