deep Blue Sky!!

deep Blue Sky!!

A Poem by jennifer little
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well this is a poem i wrote back in 2009... just hope you like it.,....

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Deep Blue sky,




As I look up at the sky I see a beautiful blue sky.

I see a bird fly by.

I look down at the ground.

I see green grass, and thank God for all the beautiful things.

I look back up at the sky and listen to the birds chirp.

I see the pretty clouds go by.

Oh what a Joy.


The End,


BY:Jennifer Little

© 2012 jennifer little


Author's Note

jennifer little
this is my poem when i wrote it back in 2009 when i first started writing poetry ,,,,, i have always writen stories and books since i was in 2nd grade but started writing poems back in 2009 when i was 17 i loved it started researching more to find out how and what to make my poems better and sound good ....

well just let me know what you think

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I thank God for such beautiful simple things such as the deep blue sky :)
Excellent job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very beautiful! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 12 Years Ago


You did very well. The simple, straightforward lyrics portray colorful images and pleasing emotions. You could possibly eliminate the first 'sky' in the first line and move the cloud reference up one line and the bird sounds down one line.
Or not. I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It feels peaceful and calm. It's a great description of the beauty of the world.

Posted 12 Years Ago


it was a good beginning.. I still have my first poem.. we should always cherish our beginnings..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Awesome write! Great imagery! Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


So insightful... Loved that you made it personal to you... Short and sweet... Well done!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



Nature poems are so pure somehow and I can feel the purity in this read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good. I like it. You wrote what you were feeling right then and there. To me, those are the best poems. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple and to the point. Not a bad write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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jennifer little
jennifer little

jackson, MI



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hi im jen i am a single mother of one daughter . i struggle from ptsd depression and anxiety . from being in abusive realationships . i enjoy the outdoors , nature swimming fishing camping boat.. more..

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