Climb to the strange world,

another one of my poems i wrote when i was 17 back in 2009 /....

Climb To the strange world,

I climb the stair's but there's no way out of here,

I look up there's a little room a mouse could fit in,

I go up to it as I shrink,

I see a beautiful world,

As I walk further there's a rabbit,

There's no way out of this world,

What am I suppose to do,

As I walk further down the small path there's a little girl who stare's and say's hi,

Then I walk further there's nowhere else to go,

What am I suppose to do?

The end,

BY:Jennifer Little

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

It's a cute poem. I really enjoyed the part about shrinking to fit in the mouse hole. That's the nice thing about dreams and fictional writing; we can be anyone or do anything. I hope you continue to study good writing technique. Coupled with your imagination you could become an awesome writer!

[Tegon Maus]

Seems to me this about growing up... the stairs... growing older. Shrinking... feeling less and less like you don't fit in. Adulthood... the wonderful world from your view. The little girl... you as a child with no cares, no worries. Nowhere to go, what am I supposed to do... That's the question isn't it? The aswer is WHATEVER YOU WANT !!!

[Cassie Fraga]

Alice in Wonderland feel.... nice write!!

[Thrinna Mae]

Wonderful...I like it...Simple yet creative!
:)))

[Laura Storm]

Funny and short though I really like it.

[SlightlyOdd]

Cool thanks for sharing its really cool

[AK]

Great imagery!awesome poem, I loved it!!!

[misscb]

Love the words... Made me feel happy when reading this... Very well written... Well done

[Kenneth S.]

Break through, create your own path, make your own meaning. That's what the jist of this piece is for me. Nice work overall.

[Danielle Starr]

Very insightful because I know I have felt this feeling of no way out. Good read thanks for sharing.