A Poem by jennifer little

another poem i wrote when i was 17 back in 2009 .....



I walk outside, and I see no more snow,

Where has it all gone to,

It melted away,

Oh what a joy,

Must be spring again,

That was fast,

Seems like just yesterday we had tons of snow on the ground,

Time to play in the rain, and put away all the winter coats,

I go and play outside, and run and jump and say yip pie it's spring time again.


BY:Jennifer Little

© 2012 jennifer little

Author's Note

jennifer little
hope you enjoy this poem .,....... well let me know what you think about it .....

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Very lovely, we have to enjoy the simple things in life, like spring and sun! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

Spring is the prettiest season to me :)
Wonderful job on this!

Posted 6 Years Ago

thats a refreshing poem :)
it brings joy to me

Posted 6 Years Ago

It's a pleasant comentary on the passing of the seasons. I suggest shortening the last three lines or breaking them up so that the line length is more even. Also, you might try mentioning specific events or scenes of spring, to provide a little color. I like your poem and the positive, happy feel it invokes. Good job.

Posted 6 Years Ago

I liked this one as well

Posted 6 Years Ago

well that was a simple piece with lots of fun packed into it... GREAT JOB!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Such a fine piece of work.

Posted 6 Years Ago

youthful exuberance for a young season.. nicely done..

Posted 6 Years Ago

Its a nice short poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago

This is really really good. ^^ keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on March 15, 2012
Last Updated on March 15, 2012


jennifer little
jennifer little

Coldwater, MI

hi im jen i am a single mother of a 1 year old baby girl i am a published author i am a Avon Representative so if you know anyone who likes Avon share my website with them www.youravon.com/jenni.. more..


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