Summer !!!

Summer !!!

A Poem by jennifer little
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well this is another poem i wrote when i was 17 years old year 2009 ..... I made changes to it a lot its use to be really short made it longer

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Summer ,



As I walk along the outside and the season's keep on changing so fast,

I look up into the sky, and see the clouds go by,

I hear the bird's chirping,

I see people swimming,

And it's really hot out,

Must be summer time again,

That was fast seems like just yesterday it was spring,

Time to have lot's of fun,

Jump into the water and go swimming,

Time to go fishing,

And boating,

Time to go kayaking, and much much more things,

I run and jump,

I lay down and look at the sunny sky,

beautiful clouds going by,

I say thank you God for all the seasons that go by,

I look upon the stars at night,

I hold your hand tight,

As I lay upon the night sky and say I love you,

Summer time is so much fun,

You hear the kids screaming, and yelling having so much fun,

I can't believe It's summer time again.


The end,


BY: Jennifer Little

© 2012 jennifer little


Author's Note

jennifer little
well let me know what you think........ give me some review s hope you like it and enjoy it i got much much more poems comeing i have my funny kids poems i wrote out and getting ready to type them all out and see what happens from there

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This was sweet and cheerful poem :)
really makes the one smiles

Posted 11 Years Ago


You forgot gardening !! Nothing better than sticking your finger in warm, moist dirt and seeing everything grow... at least up until the gophers get it !! I like this very much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Summer is my fav. season!!! and you penned very well here my friend!! love the imagery... **keep that ink flowin... Im diggin yo style!!**

Posted 12 Years Ago


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NIce you are a really good poem writer :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


being a perpetual barfly and shut in does little to give me perspective akin to yours on the seasons, however, I do remember a youth spent in play, and so I believe you capture the essence of tempus fugit, I would suggest a more... eloquent vocabulary for your descriptions, might help to draw in readers

Posted 12 Years Ago


all poems dont have to ryme so do some dont just how it goes theres many ways of writing poems

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great description... Very funny also made me laugh in places... Really great... Well done!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


It paints a nice picture...a theme that the reader can easily relate to. The only improvement to it would be adding a rhythm to it, a better cadence, you know?

Posted 12 Years Ago


yo uhave a good sense of humor and the appealing to senses..keeep writing..its good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


yeah another request to read my own poem great job me

Posted 12 Years Ago



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jennifer little

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hi im jen i am a single mother of one daughter . i struggle from ptsd depression and anxiety . from being in abusive realationships . i enjoy the outdoors , nature swimming fishing camping boat.. more..

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