Baby feeling!!!

Well it's basically saying and asking questions in this poem about is it true could i be pregnate

Baby Feeling ,

By: Jennifer Little.

　

I feel you moving,

I can feel you kicking,

I think it’s muscle spasms,

Took a pregnancy test ,

Negative,

But have all the symptoms,

Is it true ,

Can i be pregnate and not know,

Moving,

Kicking feeling,

Hot flashes,

Feeling sick ,

Head aches ,

OMG,

Is it true,

Can it be,

Well guess i’ll find out pretty soon.

The End,

Author's Note

well just another one of my poems didnt know what i should put it under so you tell me .....

Reviews

[Morrigan Nicole]

i agree with the rest, very good. though, i admit, i find you putting "the end" at the end of all your work a little irritating. especially when you end it nicely then the little "the end" sets it all out of sorts.
other than that, you did a great job.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I agree with Morrigan Nicole about the "The End," part you put in most of your writes at the end. It doesn't fit at all and throws most of your writes off, from the ending you already gave it. Check your spelling in this, it's spelled pregnant not "pregnate " and capitalize the letter I in this part "Can i " is my critique if you choose to. Also for a critique, the site already provides the title and written by on the top so you do not need to type it at the beginning of each of your writes: "Baby Feeling ,
By: Jennifer Little."
Continuing to the poem, it's nice. I like the fact of life in this with pregnancy and the feelings that surround it, you did write that well. I would categorize this poem under: Pregnancy poems.

lol great peom.

[Maria.F.T]

This poem reminds me of a baby's innocent face...especially the things that I often hear from pregnant women.

[J.]

I do have to agree with Morrigan. The "The End" part takes away from it's entire message and feeling. It is a beautiful poem nonetheless. Just that finality seems to be the needle scratching across the record.

Other than that, as a mother myself, I'd have to ask how old you are? Depending on that, would answer some things where the 'hot flashes' part is concerned. But be careful, because ALL women can have false positives, as well as false negatives. Time will tell indeed. Just give it some time and see.

[Missy Moooooo]

Awwwwh :)

[TPK Stories]

Loved it...the wonder of motherhood...

[Geraldine]

I think that's one feeling that only woman could tell and understand. ^^

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i hope everything turns out alright......

[Starcaller]

nice :3