Make a choice !!

well another one of my religious poem s

Religious poem ,

　

By:Jennifer Little

　

Make a choice .

　

Your deep ways are in the sea,

There’s no turning back now ,

The little antichrist’s alive a well,

We praise ,

And sing ,

Glory to the land,

Oh dear God ,

Helplessly left here to die upon our sins,

Bless id be the Glory land of God,

Forgive ,

Not forgive ,

We shall not parish ,

But if we have sind ,

We’ll be left here to make a choice ,

Heaven , or Hell ,

What will your choice be ?

The end,

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write, but I think you should delete the part at the end that says "The end," but that's just my thought.

[Maria.F.T]

yeah this is so religious

[Starrleena Magyck]

Amazing...loved how you asked at the end...good job!

[~Lizzy♬]

Yes, the religious poems are always amazing! :) I am so glad to see another so presented in their faith with God. I am also in my faith with God and agree with what you're portraying in the poem. It's all about how we live, but we go through purgatory before we are designated to Hell or Heaven.

~Lizzy~

[Ashley Rivers :)]

I love your strong faith in God. I am right there with ya on that :D
I do agree, people's choice between Heaven or Hell is decided by the way they're living their life.
Great job on this. It was interesting to read. A great message being spoken :) Thanks.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

it's nice to see your strong faith in God

[Starcaller]

Very nice :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Heaven or hell. Some choices are decided by your way of life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sleeping Maiden]

Hmm this was really good. =) How interesting. Choices are hard to make..

but it's a nice piece. i like it. Thank you for sharing. =)

[graynuss]

woowww ur sooo good i really get what u mean about makin a choice , i had 2 make my own choices all the time evry day alot wen others dnt get my luv 4 jesus christ our savor !! well done ur def my fave writer