lovers lane

love poem

Lovers Lane,

　

My sorrow,

My soul,

Torn out,

No where to go,

Kisses help me remember the good times,

I trust you,

I don’t trust you,

Keep turning around my love,

For i will love you forever,

Kiss me,

Hold me,

Hug me,

Cuddle with me,

Your my one and only lover,

Things from the past keep haunting me,

My dreams,

My soul,

Cant i forget the bad things,

I love you baby,

Your my lover,

MY sweet heart,

Kiss me,

Good night,

　

　

The end ,

　

BY:Jennifer Little

Reviews

[The White Wolf]

Very pretty, Jen! It is so lovely when someone can erase the past for us and help us start anew! Great Job!!! :)

[Roe]

very beautiful write

[Pencrafter]

This poem really conveys the emotion, the yearning for affection and love, the need to have a close relationship with someone. Also, I like the way it highlights the instability and insecurity which haunts many relationships. You might love a person but, in the back of your mind, there is a fear that they might leave.

[Coyote Poetry]

The places we call Lover's lane. I got old and don't remember where I went. Nice flow of thoughts and emotion in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[olla]

your writing is rogressing.. this is good..

[Sophie]

This is one of your best pieces! Great write!