friends stab you in the back!!!

hello there this descripion is how people pertend to act like your friend then stab u in the back

mad ticked off mad mad and mad friends are not friends they arnt true friends never ever ever they stab you in the back twist your leg so much until you wanna just flip out on them if you were a true friend you would of know what was actully going on your just jeluse . yeah i cant catch my dog because the kids let him out he was just playing thats how he plays ok so what ever he didnt even bite he nipped oh well thats playing for him rough playing how he plays with any other dog in this place area so what ever have a fun happy life

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    Little Jennifer get a life people and i really mean it ok

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    Little Jennifer dogs are dogs my dog is my dog he likes to play and run and have fun playing rough is his thing so what ever people serusely stabing people in the back using them for just one thing then you just stab them in the back and turn the other way come on really grow up people

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[Victoria PoetryBunny]

This seems like accident happened between a friend/person and a dog. Anyways; this needs work on spelling and form. Though I understand the meaning you are trying to post about how friends can easily hurt you by stabbing you in the back. It happens and is really quite common, sadly. This feeling most people know, with friends and people who enter and exit their lives. So, my critique; fix the spelling, delete some words not needed; make it simple yet keep the meaning. Put it into form. Delete the comments from Facebook; perhaps use words from them into the poem as well. It is a nice raw rant of feeling though, and life.

[Wretched Knight]

That's interesting, but I would use that for inspiration for a poem or story.

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not sure.........what i should;ve to say.

[Silent Unbroke]

I can really relate to this scenario. It's a painful tale but wonderfully written as well. Your grammar needs to be polished up a tad, but it's a great poem. Kudos to you.

[MoriartyMesa]

Now edits and a few other things aside, this could actually be a modern contemporary stage piece. Spoken word. And worth a few tweaks for it.

[Orlando Furioso]

gggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrr WOOF! hhhhhhhh-rrrrrrrr-WOOF-WOOF! ;)))))

[CandyFirex3]

Hmm an interesting way to make a poem through a social network.. I might try it sometime... But it is quite sharp, well written, and really quite nice. I like it.

[Morrigan Nicole]

Ummm, I am not sure I am fallowing you, jen.. A little clarification please?

[lei]

friends stab you in the back.. a very common in the society today.... nice write, Jen... Keep on writing!!!

[Starcaller]

A little hard to understand but I'm guessing your dog was playing rough with a friend and she/he didn't take it well.