~Am i seeing right~

~Am i seeing right~

A Poem by Debra Wedin
"

Becoming aware, of true love

"
On that day, I had no clue.
It's amazing, I didn't see it coming**

So tasteful the notion of us.
Is this just a single thought, only inside my head?**

My minds eye..is it playing tricks on me?
Are you really there, by my side?**

Who placed you here?
Is this just an illusion?
I'm wanting to believe its real**

I reach out..slowly, afraid I might feel nothing.
To feel the warmth of your existence, so overwhelming**

Are you the one?
Are you my dream?
Are you real?
I'm reaching inside of me, grasping for strength**

Is it true, I'm begging..please tell me.
I've searched for you my whole life**

Have you finally arrived?
You reach back..touching my cheek..I collapse with the deep sensation of fulfilment**

I awake from this reality dream.
Am I seeing right?
I open my eyes..there you appear.
It came true, now I'm truly complete**


Written by:
Debra Wedin
03/28/13

© 2013 Debra Wedin



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Debra Wedin
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A very romantic but sad piece. It is phenomenal how many people have such little self esteem, particularly after failed relationships, and see themselves unworthy and unlovable. When someone shows them attention they find it hard to believe, often ruining it with the questions in their minds causing them to doubt the person. This is a flowing and poignant depiction of someone with such internal confusion.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you John, for understanding
It amazes me how simple words written, can literally
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Honestly, I've read this a few times over. Your thoughts go back and forth so much I get lost trying to figure out the meaning or direction of this piece. It almost seems like two themes intertwining. Is this about a dream or receptive of a feeling of insecurity that was unfounded? There's potential here. I think your thoughts need more structure. OMO(one Man's opinion)

Posted 4 Years Ago


"I collapse with the deep sensation of fulfilment**"
A good poem . I like that line a lot...Thank you for sharing...:)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

MY pleasure...:)
Thank you kind poet for your poetic contribution.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Your welcome, thank you for reading!
shivohumsohum

4 Years Ago

Tathastu!
A very romantic but sad piece. It is phenomenal how many people have such little self esteem, particularly after failed relationships, and see themselves unworthy and unlovable. When someone shows them attention they find it hard to believe, often ruining it with the questions in their minds causing them to doubt the person. This is a flowing and poignant depiction of someone with such internal confusion.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you John, for understanding
It amazes me how simple words written, can literally
.. read more
That feeling of "Could this really be happening?" A good write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Yes!!
Thank you very much
AH love. It's a many splendid thing. Lovely poem my dear. Keep writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you, so very much!
We do need to pinch ourselves at times to prove that our good fortune is true.So often we don't write about it. I think it is wonderful that you put such beauty into words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Yes I agree with you.
Sometimes I write to vent, to just write about
something I feel n.. read more

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A Poem by Debra Wedin