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*~My Love Hero~*

*~My Love Hero~*

A Poem by Debra Wedin
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Written about and for my love..Lance You are amazing!!!

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Somehow I didn't know, my eyes didn't see him-
I had not thought at first, there was anything there**

There's no words to explain, I didn't know it was going to begin- for inside my heart that special place, was closed and in repair**

One day without any clue, my eyes opened up and my heart took a turn-
It happend in a blink of an eye, now each day about him, is what I want to learn**

Throughout my life I've only been dealt pain, never truly loved always being taken granted for-
I've kept locked inside, the glimpse of hope-
That one day I will be shown, that very last door**

The door is the sign that my search is at an end, that the "one" meant for me is on the other side-
All I need to do now, is be brave and open it up..for that deep happiness I deserve, I should no longer hide**

He stood right before me so delightfully sweet, yet I held my guard up high-
It didn't take long for his heart to show me, that his intentions were innocently shy**

So much I fought inside of me, telling myself "don't allow him inside"-
But you see I'm longer feeling that way, for he is one of a kind**

It's happening and I'm scared too, but I don't want to lose this man-
So I will step back and let it flow, for I know that this is gods plan**

I know for sure that slow is best, to rush this could be wrong-
However I know one true thing, my feelings for him are strong**

So here I am ready to claim, my heart will never let go-
For you see I know that I have found, my dream..
"My Love Hero"**


Written by: Debra Wedin
05/18/13

© 2013 Debra Wedin



Author's Note

Debra Wedin
This came to me so quickly
Any and all reviews are welcome

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I like it Debra but it is a little too wordy in places and lacks flow. It needs to be crisper.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Ty John. Yes, that wasn't my intention, for it to be perfect
The words came out as they did.... read more
I have no words sweetie!! Awesome!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you hun...it came from my heart, and its 100% true.

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Doing the best I can, with what I have. I have two wonderful children. I have the most wonderful fiance. I love writing and love to learn more about it. more..

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A Poem by Debra Wedin