»-My Innermost Self-«

»-My Innermost Self-«

A Poem by Debra Wedin
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Struggling thoughts inside ones mind.

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Off in a wonderland state, I feel myself going..drifting inside mind**
To most this is an unseen place, kept closed off and purposely hidden**
I'm there though, mostly not by my choice...I become ill in thought at times**
It's this place, inside my mind..that I travel to knowing its not real, yet I can taste it**
At times I fight it when I'm alone..it can frighten me.
Other times, I go there to heal and solve my expectations**
It can be so beautiful there, that beauty that most envy. Yet...sometimes its so dark, even light won't appear**
I wonder there to seek a salvation that physically is never is available. It can be lonely here, or overwhelming crowded**
It's a struggling thought or words in my ear, all that comes in will remain. If I don't wonder there to clear it, it will fill up and consume me**
My innermost self is perfect and imperfect..beautiful and confused. One day when I'm aware, the struggles will be no more**


Written by: Debra Wedin
05/21/13

© 2013 Debra Wedin



Author's Note

Debra Wedin
Trying new ways of writing.
All reviews welcome.
Thank you for reading!!

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A very introspective write that exudes a troubled soul
Some typos to sort:
that most envie-envy
I wonder there to seek a salvation-did you mean wander?
that physically is never is available-too many 'is's'
or overwhelming crowded** -overwhelmingly


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you John. Lol, I caught on to the typos..
Honestly, I write most of my poems on my phone.. read more



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This sounds exactly like me before He taught how to embrace the healing piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


A very introspective write that exudes a troubled soul
Some typos to sort:
that most envie-envy
I wonder there to seek a salvation-did you mean wander?
that physically is never is available-too many 'is's'
or overwhelming crowded** -overwhelmingly


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you John. Lol, I caught on to the typos..
Honestly, I write most of my poems on my phone.. read more
Nice little free verse. Good job

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!
Oh so wonderful;I truly enjoyed it and look forward to so many more.
Eddy.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debra Wedin

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!!

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A Poem by Debra Wedin