Forbidden Love

Forbidden Love

A Poem by That1Nerd23

I have put you through so much

I have pushed you to the ground

Each time you try to get back up

I always seem to come around

 

But why, why should I care

Why don’t I just leave you be

Rather than making you bear

The sorrow that fills the sea 

 

I don’t understand it

Or maybe I do

It’s forbidden love

Its me and you


© 2012 That1Nerd23



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Forbidden love is a great thing to write about. Nice job--I like it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Yes, thank you. (:
Marvelous
I really liked reading this one, it reminds me of a certain someone I know and the boy she loves
well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad you could connect it to your own life! (:
Excellent read. Thanks for sharing this with us. I believe that most of us have been there at one point of another in our life. there is something about what we can look but not touch , touch but not taste, taste but not swallow. Its refreshing at times to read a piece that is short but very powerful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I agree, it's a natural desire to have what is not ours to claim. It's like a kid who all.. read more
That attraction for forbidden love is contagious as coveting someone else's significant other. It's wrong but it feels so right. Acting on those emotion's can lead to a dead end but people travel down this street very often. Great write. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Yes, for sure. I agree completely. Thank you. (:
Very good

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Thank. (:
Gud stuff...

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Thank you. (:
Nicely done, love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! (:
"A forbidden Love is better than none at all."
just something it made me think of.. great poem Jess (:

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Anna dear! (:
Good stuff sad but good

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Thank you. (:
I really like this. And the flow is nice and smooth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

Thank you. (:

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