Star-crossed

poor star-crossed souls

Star crossed diamonds

these fish in the sea

predestined blindness

freewill turns the key

High Priestess tell the Lovers

the choice that is to be

so the chain can be broken

and I can love the inner me

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

This is beautiful. We often spend so much time dissecting and evaluating love, when we should really be doing as you say and beginning with loving ourselves. How else can we expect someone elses love if we dont understand ourselves. Really like how neatly the cards fit into your words seamlessly. Superbly written.

[jesserose99]

Thank you I truly appreciate those words!

[Emilie]

This sends a beautiful message. It is very meaningful, great job!

[silverwritinggoddess]

This was amazing! Beautifully written! I enjoyed your words!

[fierceauthor]

It was good, but exactly what was it about? I got a little lost!

[jesserose99]

that we are all are star-crossed lovers, experiencing too many fish in the sea, wondering around blind looking for our mate, and freewill might be the key that turns us around more. The high priestess is a tarot card, and she is kind of an intuit, and she tells the lovers card to make a choice, so this chain of looking for our mate can be broken and we can love our inner selves. I know, kind of a long explanation huh. lol

[fierceauthor]

WOW..you are a good thinker and writer!

[Chris]

To your Author's Note: THAT was evident.

It must have been an "interesting" reading. Might I suggest you make free and will one word - less distracting that way and more easily understood.

[jesserose99]

Thank you Chris, I appreciate your comments, and I made adjustments because I totally agree! :)

[Chris]

Welcome to WC.

[Firebird]

Things don't always work out as we would like. We all need to learn to love the inner me. Thank you for a lovely poem.

[jesserose99]

Thanks so much for your review!

[SariahM]

I love it! what else can I say, the way you display your feelings on the page, through the pen! absolutely wonderful!

[jesserose99]

Thank you for your review Sarah!

[SariahM]

XD ur welcome!

[A hare off]

A beautiful poem a wonderful thoughts. "and I can love the inner me" that is perfect.

[jesserose99]

Thank you for the review!!