Time

Time

A Poem by jesserose99
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just a thought

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Third eye opens

my souls mind

to a time that

shines without hands

© 2016 jesserose99


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A timeless carefree world, that takes me back to my childhood. That's what it says to me.
This poem has so much in just thirteen words. It conjures up numerious thoughts. I think it could mean many things to many people.
If only I could use that third eye, I've tried through concentration and meditation but with little success.
I think we all need to relax completely now and again, just as the poem says.

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

I really think you hit close to where this was for a lot of people, and it opened up a new meaning f.. read more
David Marsden

8 Years Ago

Yes it's ironic that when you are busy with lifes long continuous rush hour you have no time to rela.. read more
jesserose99

8 Years Ago

So true, sounds like you use your third eye just fine, maybe not aware of it being used, but it is a.. read more
A walk into the dimension without past and future.....beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A very nice and concise interpretation and quantification of time, a concept that is so varied it almost defies description. Incorporating the hands (of a clock?) into the write narrows down the spectrum into a much smaller window; this sets the framework into a finite space in time. My compliments! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Thanks Dan! I appreciate the visit, you always return the review. I will too!
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Very nice! Short yet powerful! Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it! did you get a read request from me for Hello me? I don't normally send the.. read more
LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Lol I haven't a clue. I just logged on and seen that someone had commented on a poem of yours so I d.. read more
the third eye opens,interesting concept,i like it jess

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Thank you wordman I am glad you like it!
brilliant, simple yet profound

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Thank you Andrew...oh, and I read all my read requests lol...so there!!
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

lol.............................
I love this, so simple yet profound. A time that shines without hands conjures thoughts of childhood, where the only concept of time we had was when we played all day and realised we were hungry, therefore time to refuel, so we could run around more, carefree and laughing, jumping, skipping. Three things which you don't see adults do nearly enough of. Never mind these fancy courses for stress management, just join in next time you see kids play skipping ropes and you'll forget all about that pesky grown up stuff, like work, bills etc.
Although this is not scientifically tested, I guarantee 100% success :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

You speak so true...who wants to live in grown up world all the time anyway
when i was a kid...time had no hands...and i was tied behind the back of my childhood...not a care in the world...no tha third eye, reminds me of when time didn't move so damn fast as it does now...

but that old time still shines in my memory.

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

You are so right...it reminds me of your time poem...disappearing with a shot that wont go back
Every time I right
I remember you right
nothing is fine
till I not remember you right

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Thank you my friend!
samparks,sam

8 Years Ago

Friend ship is nice
if some one realized it nice
Nothing to in hide
every thing.. read more
Just wondering, when my third eye opens, will it be near-sighted too? To be honest, there are some souls I really don't want to look into.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

8 Years Ago

maybe that is where third eye blind came from...lol

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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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