Stepped out

Stepped out

A Poem by jesserose99
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learning to get thoughts out of the picture altogether

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I stepped outside my mind

when I thought inside my heart


there was much there I could find

when my thoughts left that part


© 2016 jesserose99



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Love this Jesse. This pretty much sums up my ideology I think. I have always been one to think of the differences of thinking with head and heart and how much thought of this thought we think of as writers. I have always been of the opinion that we only ever escape from one when we are thinking from the other and that it is such a release to put mind's thoughts on paper finally and that writing them is the only way they can escape the mind.
Superb.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

alifeacoustic

1 Year Ago

Oh, got bored looking at mine and thought I would go for a wander. So much stuff in here. My head do.. read more
jesserose99

1 Year Ago

well Im glad those hooligans haven't knocked over the street signs again!
alifeacoustic

1 Year Ago

Nope, all spick and span in here :



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When we allow our hearts to think for us, it can open up new vistas....and it can be dangerous as well. Difficult to separate thoughts from our actions though, isn't it? Good write. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lydi, you are so right, you can go with your heart, but it can be as big of a risk as not .. read more
The views are so much different when we allow our hearts to look inside. Really good Jesse

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

Thank you Anthony, I am glad you enjoyed it!
Love this Jesse. This pretty much sums up my ideology I think. I have always been one to think of the differences of thinking with head and heart and how much thought of this thought we think of as writers. I have always been of the opinion that we only ever escape from one when we are thinking from the other and that it is such a release to put mind's thoughts on paper finally and that writing them is the only way they can escape the mind.
Superb.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

alifeacoustic

1 Year Ago

Oh, got bored looking at mine and thought I would go for a wander. So much stuff in here. My head do.. read more
jesserose99

1 Year Ago

well Im glad those hooligans haven't knocked over the street signs again!
alifeacoustic

1 Year Ago

Nope, all spick and span in here :
Expressed from the heart - a deeply felt thought.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

thank you solar, I will stop on by and review you here soon
This is like Heart over Logic. Ohh... Sometimes, we need to feel rather than think. This is short, yet clear. Thanks you for sharing your thoughts. This is really nice! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your very astute review, I appreciate your stopping by and plan on returning the favor.. read more
You are absolutely right Jesse... we have enough thoughts in our mind to create amazing things but most of us don't take them seriously.....Such an amazing thought in creating this mate....God bless you....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

Thank you Dhiman, you are so sweet!
Out of `16,000 thoughts, which one to believe. Mind plays the game, heart let you select one. Beautiful work. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

wow Guaravv, what a beautiful thing to say.
The conflict of heart versus mind, a never ending struggle til mind prevails or even just love.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

so true it is a joust isn't it!
and yes, our heart knows what it wants to do, and often when we actually should, we don't listen to it...

we think way too much and think ourselves out of what the heart really wants.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jesserose99

1 Year Ago

thank you Jacob, there are certain times the brain is like a drunken driver, and I need to give over.. read more
jesserose99

1 Year Ago

and not because of too much wine either
this is amazing...............

Posted 1 Year Ago


jesserose99

1 Year Ago

thank you for that!
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

1 Year Ago

welcome....

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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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