Please don't

Please don't

A Poem by jesserose99
"

inside my head

"

Please don't mistake my silence

for something negative

I won't act out in violence

Im just inside my head


I step inside sometimes

on a coffee break

from the chitter and chatter

outside that I can't take


So please stop asking me

'whats wrong, you seem so quiet'

or 'you're not ok, I don't buy it'


Im just on my minds front porch

in my rocking chair

looking for my fork to eat

the thought muffin I prepared



© 2016 jesserose99



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This is one of those works that everyone would enjoy reading regardless of their taste in poetry and many would relate to it. It's a wonderful and a very true piece. I really like your choice of words and the way you write too. So, well done and keep on writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

thanks, I appreciate your review



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I can relate to this.... I call this the Maiden's Window. It is where i hear and see the real world just beyond here... You write songs too.... Neat. I started a song about the Maiden's window. I hadn't finished it yet. Perhaps you might join me and help finish it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


I like your writing. You say so much with so few words. Nice poem.

Posted 10 Months Ago


This is one of those works that everyone would enjoy reading regardless of their taste in poetry and many would relate to it. It's a wonderful and a very true piece. I really like your choice of words and the way you write too. So, well done and keep on writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

thanks, I appreciate your review
Blunt and simple. Cute. Easy listening by its note and deduce and infer,.,, and play by play underneath its grey lies a cryptic truth, I think.

The coffee break with it’s chatter is really cool. LIke that part.

This makes me laugh, cause I relate.

My sisters do this to me all the time.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Jesse, enjoyed your poem, written very well. I can relate as I am comfortable in my own thoughts. I am a realist but also a free thinker. Peace and Blessings, Richie B.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I really really like this one !
so relateable, when we drift off to be with ourselves.
I love the thought muffin !
next time you mix a batch, save one for me !
bill

Posted 1 Year Ago


Thank you for this. I truly sympathize. This and another piece from another member, coupled with a couple of other reasons, lead me to sign up and post my own poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this. It was fantastic.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I bet many people have said this but this is very relatable, and I love the consciousness picture you built and also I noticed your poems, or at least some, have a certain....joy, or humour? Maybe it's the way you play with the words, can't explain but it's like there's a warm flame on everything (again, or at least some) you write...I'm not good at explaining these things with words, that's why I restrain myself from making reviews... anyways, good job

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was relatable and super fun to read. Thanks for writing it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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