Burning Angel

Burning angel

on a magic carpet

riding through a neon sky

traveling south to unheard of lands

where burning angels

.....learn to fly

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

I see comets or falling stars in a different light now as burning angels but we can still make a wish!

[Cryingkate]

Being unable to pin point an exact meaning leaves this to connotations. I like it much. it has a sense of enchanted danger. An Angel we normally think as good yet burning, as though it is a fallen angel. I then ask myself could the Burning Angel be a Soul on fire? The southern travels stands out to me with a flag... We hear in the Spirtual teachings of West and East But I don't recall Southern. Less it refers to Hell. Then weaving the Fallen Angel whom learned to travel the Fire's of Hell and now goeth Burning. I see an image of a Witch who meddled with Sorcery and Magic and was lowered into Hell and travels as a scorched Soul

[jesserose99]

I love your review!! Thank you, very insightful thoughts on it. This one just kind of came out at a weird time, but it's one of my favorites because it was done with no thought. I will drop by and read some more of you soon!

[NotAboutMe]

Such a short poem, but every word a magical journey.

Nice Job.

[jesserose99]

Thank you for reading!

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Burning poen what give me wings. Magic of new begin . Magic of your words. Make me happy and hopeful. Thanks for that.

[jesserose99]

Thank you Martin! Sorry it took so long to respond!

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that s all right. i sometimes also take time to react on rewiev

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, sounds much like the beginning of it all, and those angels who chose to go opposite direction from the Word handed down---the magic wears off fast with that kind of ride.

this could many meanings....i like abstract that allows us to go places, hopefully the carpet has enough fuel.

j.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
awesome write........
short and effective......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Bacchus]

This gives me chills... well done.

[jesserose99]

Thanks for that!! will stop by and see you today too.