Burning Angel

Burning Angel

A Poem by jesserose99

Burning angel

on a magic carpet

riding through a neon sky

traveling south to unheard of lands

where burning angels

.....learn to fly


© 2016 jesserose99



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I see comets or falling stars in a different light now as burning angels but we can still make a wish!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Being unable to pin point an exact meaning leaves this to connotations. I like it much. it has a sense of enchanted danger. An Angel we normally think as good yet burning, as though it is a fallen angel. I then ask myself could the Burning Angel be a Soul on fire? The southern travels stands out to me with a flag... We hear in the Spirtual teachings of West and East But I don't recall Southern. Less it refers to Hell. Then weaving the Fallen Angel whom learned to travel the Fire's of Hell and now goeth Burning. I see an image of a Witch who meddled with Sorcery and Magic and was lowered into Hell and travels as a scorched Soul


Posted 10 Months Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

I love your review!! Thank you, very insightful thoughts on it. This one just kind of came out at .. read more
Such a short poem, but every word a magical journey.

Nice Job.

Posted 10 Months Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

Thank you for reading!
Burning poen what give me wings. Magic of new begin . Magic of your words. Make me happy and hopeful. Thanks for that.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

Thank you Martin! Sorry it took so long to respond!
WRITER-----------TYPEWRITER

9 Months Ago

that s all right. i sometimes also take time to react on rewiev
wow, sounds much like the beginning of it all, and those angels who chose to go opposite direction from the Word handed down---the magic wears off fast with that kind of ride.

this could many meanings....i like abstract that allows us to go places, hopefully the carpet has enough fuel.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


WoW!!!
awesome write........
short and effective......
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


This gives me chills... well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

1 Year Ago

Thanks for that!! will stop by and see you today too.

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This is my first attempt at slam poetry, and I'm excited to film a performance of this piece over the coming day.

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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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