Naked Heart

Naked Heart

A Poem by jesserose99

Naked heart
is cold without clothes
breaks apart
with her blues ridden woes

Beats her a river
while drumming her song
bleeding beginner
at learning she's strong

© 2016 jesserose99



Author's Note

jesserose99
Haven't been on the site for like 8 months. Stopped writing when crisis threw me for a loop. Hope this is okay,

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yes...there is brokenness yet hope and strength in enduring with positive attitude .. glad you are back! your crisis must be, for the most part, past i presume. i think you have a good way with words and line and form ..i subscribed to you and will try to keep up! ;)
E.

Posted 8 Months Ago


one particularity about this kind of "heart" - if it is indeed the one i'm familliar with - is the silent(in it's substance, not on it's manifestation) understood-by-no-one suffering, i see it as the representation of child birth (where this heart would be the baby), and this poem pleases me, it pleases me a lot, because it reiterates my vision ahaha, ah right, review, uhm good job

Posted 9 Months Ago


Honest and true words shared my friend. Life does make us stronger. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

Thank you for visiting!
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Always my pleasure and you are welcome dear Jesse.
Welcome back. And it was very okay.

Posted 9 Months Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

Thanks Robert!
A nice write jesse, if only the heart had a raincoat or some protective clothing to protect from the elements. Good to see you again:)

Posted 10 Months Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

I know, maybe some long underwear for the cold. Thanks for stopping by!
more than okay, jesse...there is so much feeling packed into this piece...

the heart takes time to develop a thick skin....it bleeds much more easily when we are younger
and yes, when we bare it...it can get quite cold if the person we bare it for simply freezes us out.

j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

Thank you, and so true:)
Nicely done. Much said in such a short amount, no easy task. Good job

Posted 10 Months Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping by.
We all need to take a break, every now and then. It's good to see you again.

This is an interesting poem that conjured some imagery. Being stripped down to nothing can make people realize just how strong they are.

Posted 10 Months Ago


jesserose99

9 Months Ago

Thanks Clifford!

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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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