Justify

Justify

A Poem by Jessie

Justify
 
 
Is it really necessary
to keep one within
your reach, and never
out of sight?
 
Is it wrong for me to look
to the left instead of
to the right?
 
Was I designed to walk in
the footprints in which you
so gracefully lay?
 
To live to your every
command, only to obey
 
Dose my life consists
to everyone elses except
my very own?
 
Is this the way I'm
suppose to feel?
next to nothing,
simply alone
 
Can you justify some
one treating another
so wrong?
When that person
just wants to fit it,
just wants to belong.
wanting to be loved
by someone, needing
it so much.
 
To feel the warmth
of anothers touch.
So how does one justify
not recieving the
smallest of all this?
 
These are things that
a woman should never
have to miss...
 

          

© 2009 Jessie


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I am not as concern with the layout as T. Love mention but the words are amazing. Your style and rhyming pattern are traditional in form but your heart and your straight forward approach makes this poem special. I like your touch!

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Posted 14 Years Ago


its good but u should make it look like a poem it looks like a paragraph

but otherwise good job

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Posted 14 Years Ago



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