The Road

 Down that road I fear to tread

because that dark road

no light does it shed

It seems so cold

no warmth do I feel

no rays from the sun

just the coldness of its chill

you can not see its end

just its whinedy twists of turns

Entwined with no meaning,

no feeling, of no concerns

A hollow sound blows out from its side

Erie and wicked both deep and wide

No comfort does it give

No life to live

I feel there's no safe house

at the end of this road

Only a darkness with no light and

a chill thats so cold

No, I won't travel a road

where no light paves its way

I will choose the road

where night is turned to day

I will choose the road that has a guide

Someone who will carry me through

I choose the road to Heaven, Dear Lord,

I choose the road to you... 

Reviews

[Elvina CZq]

Thank you for read and review one of my writing :) So, I thought I should do the same to you.

Oh, wow, this is really beautiful. I think it suits my situation right now, that I needed to look for the road of light to shine my way. You've wrote it so beautifully and creative. Each word describes the picture perfectly and positively.

Thank you for sharing. This is a wonderful road to take :)

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

A profound piece of poetry very metaphorical yet ambiguous i like the road analogy it is both apt and imaginative for the dark times that we now live in well done i liked this perhaps we might need a cheerful ending to keep the readers peckers up here though.

[THE LOST ROSE]

What a great rhymic flowing poem. If this poem was written for a love one I need to speak with him so I can figure out to get someone to write such art work for me. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful write here
Everything flows so well.
Wonderful write.