On this day...

On this day...

 

 

All stood back and let her pass slowly by

Not a whisper was heard, not even a sigh

Silence was about, a moment so quiet and still

The pain that was surging through her

the whole room could feel

 

As she reached the front of the church

Her eyes wailed up with tears 

The memories raced of times together

now gone... All those precious years

 

No hesitation was made as she looked

him in the eyes as he stood beside his future

wife to be precise

She quietly spoke.....

"For all the years I stood by you and the

pain you put me through.. for raising

your children, and doing what I was suppose

to do! I only felt it right for me to be here on this

special day, to be the one walking in front of her

To lead the way! and to congradulate you both!

For today your lives together begin...

Unlike mine, it has just came to an end".....

 

On this day!

Reviews

[AK]

Well that would certainly be "awkwaaaaaaaaard"

[The Raven King]

This reminds me of the birth of Sleeping Beauty when everyone is invited to the Happy Occasion to bless the new child with gifts, but the fairy or witch or whatever who wasn't invited shows up and places this curse on the baby and pretty much ruins the party. While her words are those of congratulations, this is a curse in disguise. Look at the life and time we had and are now gone, don't think it won't happen to you. I like what this piece implies more than what it says. "I only felt it right for me to be here on this special day, to be the one walking in front of her To lead the way" Good Job!