Little Razor Blade

Little Razor Blade

A Poem by jumbie's #1 fan
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jesus is my anti-razor blade

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Little Razor Blade

 

 

You are my one

My only

The one and only things that controls me

Not my parents

Not my friends

Just this little scrap of metal

With a razor sharp edge

 

You're the only one who knows when I cry

The only one who knows when I want to die

No one else cares, no one else is there

Just you and me

The both of us watching my wrists bleed

Using

Using

More and more

Closing

Closing

Door after door

 

But listen little razor blade,

I hear a still small voice

Whispering to me

Quiet now, little razor blade

This man could help me

Look, little razor blade

He wants to save me

He cares, He wants to be there

 

Let me go little razor blade

I want to get better

I won’t let my life go continuously through the shredder

No little razor blade, I don’t need you

He’s taking my hand now

He’s leading me through

 

You are not my one

You are not my only

He won’t let you control me

You're just a little scrap of metal

With a dull, weak edge

 

He holds me when I cry

He won’t let me die

He loves me

He understands how I feel

Just me and him

Watching these wrists heal

 

© 2010 jumbie's #1 fan


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Winners have been Chosen in the Christian Poetry Contest.

The Winners are:

~ For The Best God Breathed Poem ~ Us by Tate Morgan

~ For The Best Inspirational Poem ` Little Razor Blade by jumbie's #1 fan

` For The Best Christian Poem ~ My Lord, My Life by PoetGirl http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Christian-Poetry/12436/

I wish to Thank each & every person that entered the contest & ask that God pours a multitude of Blessings on each one of you!

Thanks!

Im His Daughter



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Winners have been Chosen in the Christian Poetry Contest.

The Winners are:

~ For The Best God Breathed Poem ~ Us by Tate Morgan

~ For The Best Inspirational Poem ` Little Razor Blade by jumbie's #1 fan

` For The Best Christian Poem ~ My Lord, My Life by PoetGirl http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Christian-Poetry/12436/

I wish to Thank each & every person that entered the contest & ask that God pours a multitude of Blessings on each one of you!

Thanks!

Im His Daughter



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A FREAKING MAZING!! This was fantastic. Wasn't sure in the beginning tho, was a tiny bit put off by the subject, only because i wasn't sure where it was going (in my mind of course) but it got better & better! GLORY TO GOD!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow. just wow. this poem is so powerful and beyond what words can describe! i love it so much. i hope that everyone who struggles with this problem can have a wonderful outcome like the end of this poem. it is rather inspiring and i was hooked by the end of the first stanza. you can really see the change from being under the spell of the razor to being able to overcome it, from the change between the description of it. from razor sharp edge to dull weak edge. again, this is unbelievably amazing. thank you for bringing this into the world. :D

Posted 15 Years Ago



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