Carve

this isn't really my style of writing but i thought i'd try it out...but if you like it, check out Hope and I's writing...

Let me control you

Let me turn back the time

To when I was yours

And you were mine

I see you

And your twelve faces

Hang you on the back of my door

Erase the traces

One hand towards me

The other up to the sky

Why is it that you cry?

Guess what its time for?

Time for you to get a life

Here, I have this knife

I’ll carve into you

Into your face

Carve a one…

Eleven more until you're done

How about a two…

Will you ever be true?

Here’s a three…

From the generous hands of me

Chipping in a four…

You will never be the same anymore

Five…

You once were alive

Cutting into you a six…

I can see what makes you tick

Seven…

Don’t you wish we were at eleven?

Getting closer, here’s an eight…

If you want, I could stuff you in a crate

Knife carves a nine…

Three more and then you're all mine

Ten…

Dip this knife in blood to become a pen

Eleven…

I wish we were back at seven

Twelve…

Well here we are my darling

I’ve carved upon your face

Now take me back to that place

Where I was yours

And you were mine

From now on

I will tell the time

And you will hang on the back of my wall

Knife-carved numbers and all

 

Reviews

[Save the Trees, Save th..]

wow that was awesome. wowowowow scary momo review my new one

[These Haunted Hallways]

OMG, this was soo awesome!!! I totally loved it!! Taking an example of a clock and turning it into a human analog (a past lover or somethin), and scorching the bad times into the skin like a carving brand. Ouch! Fantastic as always- totally awesome here!

B.A.