System Sated

Clicks and sounds, 
Pushing it through, 
A united process, 
Keeping the system together 

If it breaks, 
Everything will fall apart 

When it wakes, 
Every dream will come true 

Clicking and whirring, 
Unemotional purring, 
Like the god hand it is 

It's simple, 
Watching it work, 
Watching it sleep 

The system keeps itself working, 
The system keeps itself alive, 
Wish anyone could say the same for its users

Reviews

[Ruth]

Brilliant! So many times I hear people lament about the system but we are all the cogs that turn it!
Powerful way to convey that love...
If we want to have peace, we all have to be peaceful...
If we all want to have equality, we all have to unite...
If we all want a fair system...we need to stop consuming, voting and realise we are the many, powers that be are the few!
Loved the poem
xoxo

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write, some parts in this I really like:
"If it breaks,
Everything will fall apart "

"Clicking and whirring,
Unemotional purring, "

[EMMIE]

LOL I LOVE THE SYSTEM AND THIS IS A GREAT POEM ABOUT THE SYSTEM. SO TRUE