Can I have you back?

A Book by jhed

Result of boredom..I was listening to the song 'Jesus take the wheel' by Carrie Underwood when I wrote this one..

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© 2010 jhed

Author's Note

what do you think??
Reviews would be very appreciated.. :)

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bianca

absolutely lovely poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago

breezy

this is amazing. its sad, but its one of the best poems i've read in awhile.

Posted 13 Years Ago

deadly healer

tear. :) it was very sad. i LOVED reading this. lots of powerful meaning.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Daydreamer54

this was so sad. :( I could imagine what was going on though. It must have been horrible 4 u to experience something like that. Especially on ur Bday.

Posted 14 Years Ago

rielovella

Awww... how sad... Jhed, is this true? Nice poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Shakespeare's Daughter

wow- this is amazing. a close friend died on impact in a car accident two days ago... this poem really hit close to home.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Simple_mee

This is so b'ful. Cud feel the pain radiating from every word. Wish nothing like this happens to anyone....

Posted 14 Years Ago

The Analog Kid

Nice emotional plot. Spelling: breaks=brakes. The flow was a bit choppy and akward. I think this would be better off as a short story.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Huggy Bear

A great powerful love poem. It was really good and I commend you on this work:)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Bette

this is sooo sad. the only thing i think messed me up while reading was "I cried and tap you on the shoulder" change tap to tapped. other than that well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on April 2, 2010
Last Updated on May 23, 2010

Author

jhed

manila, Philippines

About

i'm a 16 year old girl from the Philippines who was influenced by my classmates to write stories and poems. I'm a "not so popular" in my new school but got great and loving and trustworthy friends to .. more..